Experiences with Hakrin Water

I've taken little excerpts from In the Jungle. They are all about our characters' experiences with Hakrin.

Bo shuffled to the stream, and was just about to jump in when suddenly...

“AAAAAAAAHHH!!!”
Bo screamed in horror as a green, muddy hand popped out of the stream with a loud and upsetting SPLORPP.
The hand slithered out of the water and wrapped itself around Bo’s neck. Bo was too wimpy to keep himself on shore, so he was pulled into the muddy water.

Zoe looked at everybody in horror. Then, with a most determined expression, she leaped into the water.
Tommy, Faysaham and Mahasyaf waited for her to come back up.

Guess what?

She never did.

Tommy gasped.

Tommy gasped.

Tommy gasped.

Tommy fainted, and rolled into the stream.

Mahasyaf’s lips wobbled as he screamed. His legs slowly slipped out from under him. Faysaham’s arms slowly reached out as he yelled. Maysahaf reached for Faysaham. their paws brushed, but all was lost. Maysahaf splashed into the murky depths of the water.
“NO! NOOOOOOOOO!” Faysaham howled.

3.
The python strained all his muscles
2.
They were almost there!
1.
Mahasyaf burst out of the water. But as for the snake, it floated down, eyes glazed as it settled deep down into the mud.
“NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!” Faysaham screamed and lunged forward, again.
Quickly he ran around the jungle again and yelled for another python.
“HEAR YE PYTHONS! THOU FELLOW PYTHON HATH SLIPPED INTO HAKRIN STREAM, AND YE MUST SAVE YE FELLOW SPECIES!”