May 15, 2012
May 14, 2012
Lights, Camera...Attack!
It appears we have some more research from 4G network. It's about lights.
Ultra-Violet (C) Light
There are three types of UV rays, UVA, UVB, and UVC. Although UV light is invisible to humans, it is very dangerous to be exposed to it, especially UVC. In some fictionous jungles, UVC is known to be a sickly, nasty, blue-green color. Victims of UVC light have experienced skin redness and eye irritation. The most dangerous thing about this light is that it highly energetic and can burn skin.
Loud Sounds
If a victim of any of these lights makes a very loud sound, such as screaming, things are expected to happen. Small, winged animals might make an attack, and there is a high probability of a lightning bolt war or hairy tentacle tickling-to-death.
May 13, 2012
We've Gotten More Feedback!
That 10 chapters is really funny.
May 12, 2012
After Hakrin...Morphology
Our Uncle
May 11, 2012
About, 2,000 Words More 'Till 10,000
There are still 10 chapters. If we're aiming for 30 chapters, we'll probably have about...37,494 words in all.
I didn't do any math; those are just random numbers.
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Hup, 2, 3, 4! We Know What We're Aiming For!
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May 9, 2012
Experiences with Hakrin Water
Bo shuffled to the stream, and was just about to jump in when suddenly...
“AAAAAAAAHHH!!!”
Bo screamed in horror as a green, muddy hand popped out of the stream with a loud and upsetting SPLORPP.
The hand slithered out of the water and wrapped itself around Bo’s neck. Bo was too wimpy to keep himself on shore, so he was pulled into the muddy water.
Zoe looked at everybody in horror. Then, with a most determined expression, she leaped into the water.
Tommy, Faysaham and Mahasyaf waited for her to come back up.
Guess what?
She never did.
Tommy gasped.
Tommy gasped.
Tommy gasped.
Tommy fainted, and rolled into the stream.
Mahasyaf’s lips wobbled as he screamed. His legs slowly slipped out from under him. Faysaham’s arms slowly reached out as he yelled. Maysahaf reached for Faysaham. their paws brushed, but all was lost. Maysahaf splashed into the murky depths of the water.
“NO! NOOOOOOOOO!” Faysaham howled.
3.
The python strained all his muscles
2.
They were almost there!
1.
Mahasyaf burst out of the water. But as for the snake, it floated down, eyes glazed as it settled deep down into the mud.
“NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!” Faysaham screamed and lunged forward, again.
Quickly he ran around the jungle again and yelled for another python.
“HEAR YE PYTHONS! THOU FELLOW PYTHON HATH SLIPPED INTO HAKRIN STREAM, AND YE MUST SAVE YE FELLOW SPECIES!”
Hakrin
We also have a very interesting science fact about Hakrin water, a deadly poison. From 4G network.
Hakrin
Hakrin water is formed from when water touches Hakrin, a brown substance. Many people mistake Hakrin for mud, but in reality it isn’t. When Hakrin touches water, the water’s molecules get morphed and the Hakrin contaminates the water. Hakrin is known to be a deadly poison which first knocks someone unconscious after 5 seconds exposure to it, then kills from 10 - 30 minutes. If you see someone who is unconscious from Hakrin water, then immediately call 911 for help.
Effects on Extraterrestrial Beings
If a creature that does not come from planet Earth stands over Hakrin water, strange things are known to happen, such as loss of their Extraterrestrial powers, headaches, and body morphing.
That's it for today, folks!
Until then, stay tuned and stay away from the evils of Hakrin water!
We've gotten feedback!
Me, H, has shown a chapter to a person who has never heard, seen or read about Zoe and Bo before. His first comment was
Then...
I answered that stuff, then:
And he was like..
So basically since he liked the story, you're going to love it. Be patient, and the story should come very soon!
May 7, 2012
Jungle!
Chapter 8 is the longest so far. We have 14 pages and a count of only, um.....4,781 words. And I thought we were above 10,000!
May 1, 2012
Seasons
I'd like to talk about the seasons.
In Season 1, Zoe, Bo, and Tommy looked like this:
In Season 2, they looked like this. Way better.
But there was yet another problem. It was with Bo. His face was shaped funny. It looked like bread. So I changed it to a normal monkey face. That had to go into another season. So we welcomed Season 3.
He looks much better like that, huh?
Zoe before -- whoa, she's gotta do something about those flabs. She looks pretty grieved about them.
Zoe after -- wow, she did some pretty good exercise!
Bo before -- What a fatty!
Bo after -- his monkey jumping did some good!
Oooh, Tommy. There's no need to be so angry. It's just that you gotta lose some weight, boy!
Yes! That's right! Be happy! Those are some nice pounds you lost. You deserve that silver star that you put in the wrong place!